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THE MAP BELOW SHOE THE CENTER OF SMALL TOWN CALLED ISLIP AS IT IS NOW AND PLAN FOR ITS DEVELOPMENT.

THE MAP BELOW SHOE THE CENTER OF SMALL TOWN CALLED ISLIP AS IT IS NOW AND PLAN FOR ITS DEVELOPMENT. Kl6Lk
THE PROVIDED MAP ILLUSTRATES THE VARIOUS CHANGES EXPERIENCED BY THE CENTER ISLIP THAT UNDERGO IN CERTAIN DEVELOPMENT IN FUTURE LAYOUT. OVERALL, THE ISLIP FACED SIGNIFICANT CHNAGES IN GIVEN PEIROD AND MORE FACILITIES IS INTRODUCED IN PURPOSED PLAN. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE CENTRE SIZE ELEVATED IN FUTURE PLAN AS COUNTRYSIDE IS ALSO COVERED AND DUAL CARRIAGEWAY IS CONSTRUCTED SURROUDED TO ISLIP. IN NORTH-WEST SIDE BUS STATION IS CONSTRUCTED IN NEW LAYOUT WHEREAS, THE MAIN ROAD REPLACED BY PATH FOR PEDESTRAINS ONLY. THE SHOPS SBOVE MAIN ROAD IS REPLACED SHOPPING CENTER MEANHWHILE, CAR PARK IS DEVEPOLED NEAR TO SHOPPING AREA. THE MAPS FURTHER COLLATE THAT, IN NORTH-EAST SIDE OF MAP NEW HOUSING IS CREATED WITH ATTACHED PATH TO DUAL CARRIAGEWAY AND THE SHOPS AND SCHOOL REMAINS THE SAME. THE PARK IS CONTRACTED IS SIZE THAN PRESENTED IN PREVIOUS PLAN. LASTLY, NEW HOUSING PLACE IS CONTRUCTED IN PLANNED DEVELOPMENT.
THE PROVIDED MAP ILLUSTRATES THE VARIOUS
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CHANGES
EXPERIENCED BY THE CENTER
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ISLIP
THAT UNDERGO IN CERTAIN DEVELOPMENT IN FUTURE LAYOUT.

OVERALL
, THE
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ISLIP
FACED SIGNIFICANT
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CHNAGES
IN
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GIVEN
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PEIROD
AND MORE FACILITIES
IS INTRODUCED
IN PURPOSED PLAN.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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SEEN
THAT, THE
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CENTRE
SIZE ELEVATED IN FUTURE PLAN AS COUNTRYSIDE IS
ALSO
COVERED AND DUAL CARRIAGEWAY
IS CONSTRUCTED
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SURROUDED
TO
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ISLIP
. IN NORTH-WEST SIDE BUS STATION
IS CONSTRUCTED
IN NEW LAYOUT WHEREAS, THE MAIN ROAD REPLACED BY PATH FOR
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PEDESTRAINS
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ONLY
. THE SHOPS
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SBOVE
MAIN ROAD
IS REPLACED
SHOPPING CENTER
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MEANHWHILE
, CAR PARK IS
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DEVEPOLED
NEAR TO SHOPPING AREA.

THE MAPS
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, IN NORTH-EAST SIDE OF MAP NEW HOUSING
IS CREATED
WITH ATTACHED PATH TO DUAL CARRIAGEWAY AND THE SHOPS AND SCHOOL REMAINS THE SAME.
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THE
PARK
IS CONTRACTED
IS
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SIZE
THAN PRESENTED IN PREVIOUS PLAN.
LASTLY
, NEW HOUSING PLACE IS
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CONTRUCTED
IN PLANNED DEVELOPMENT.

IELTS academic THE MAP BELOW SHOE THE CENTER OF SMALL TOWN CALLED ISLIP AS IT IS NOW AND PLAN FOR ITS DEVELOPMENT.

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149 words
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