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The linear chart illustrates the information about an ancient time period and the recent projected population in China and India. The data has been given in billion of individuals.

The linear chart illustrates the information about an ancient time period and the recent projected population in China and India. The data has been given in billion of individuals. aVO2Y
From the overall, it can be vividly manifested that the highest number of population seen in India in recent years. While, the lowest data followed by China. In details, in 1990 projected masses growth observed merely 9 billions. Whereas, there had been gradually increase till 2030 and stop on 14 millions. Apart from this, it have minor rose up in 2014 which was closely fifteen billions folks noticed in this era. Whilst, in 2040 a few increase witness in China growth. It is approximately 16. 50 billion then, at the end of period there have been surge up exactly on 16 billions. Moving to the rest of the data, in the case of China people projected population comprised 11 billions in 1990. After that, there was minor rose up which was nearby 14 billion then, in 2020. There have few dwindle approximately half billion. Moving ahead it has been decreased gradually until 2050 and, it has been seen barely 13 billion at the end of the period.
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, in 1990 projected masses growth observed
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billions
. Whereas, there had been
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increase till 2030 and
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on 14 millions. Apart from this, it
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minor rose up in 2014 which was
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folks noticed in this era. Whilst, in 2040 a few increase witness in China growth. It is approximately 16. 50
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billion
then, at the
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of period there have been surge up exactly on 16
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. Moving to the rest of the data, in the case of China
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projected population comprised 11
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in 1990. After that, there was minor rose up which was nearby 14
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billion
then, in 2020. There have few dwindle approximately half
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billion
. Moving ahead it has
been decreased
gradually
until 2050 and, it has been
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IELTS academic The linear chart illustrates the information about an ancient time period and the recent projected population in China and India. The data has been given in billion of individuals.

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