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 The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European Community

The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European Community 5dLm
The line graph illustrates the amount of wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European community over 5 years between 1985 and 1990. (Units are measured in tonnes. )Overall, it is clear that Canada exported more wheat than Australia and European community for most of the period shown. However, while Canada's wheat exports fluctuated and Australia's fell, wheat exports from European community rose steadily throughout the period shown. In 1985, about 19 million tonnes wheat was exported from Canada, that was the highest for that year. By the next year, Canada's wheat exports declined approximately by 3 million tonnes. However, in 1988 the figure reached a peak at 25 million tonnes, prior to a decrease of 11 million tonnes in 1989. Initially, European community exported 17 million tonnes of wheat. By 1990, this figure was the highest at 21 million tonnes. By contrast, the level of wheat exports from Australia remained the lowest in both 1985 and 1990, with exports figure stood at 15 million tonnes and 11 million tonnes respectively.
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in Australia, Canada and European
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over 5 years between 1985 and 1990. (Units
are measured
in tonnes.
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, it is
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clear
that Canada exported more
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wheat
than Australia and European
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community
for most of the period shown.
However
, while Canada's
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exports
fluctuated and Australia's fell,
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exports
from European
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community
rose
steadily
throughout the period shown. In 1985, about 19
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million
tonnes
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wheat
was exported
from Canada, that was the highest for that year. By the
next
year, Canada's
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declined approximately by 3
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tonnes.
However
, in 1988 the figure reached a peak at 25
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tonnes, prior to a decrease of 11
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million
tonnes in 1989.
Initially
, European
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exported 17
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million
tonnes of
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wheat
. By 1990, this figure was the highest at 21
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tonnes. By contrast, the level of
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wheat
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from Australia remained the lowest in both 1985 and 1990, with
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figure stood at 15
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million
tonnes and 11
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million
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respectively
.
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IELTS academic The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European Community

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