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The line graph elucidates the wheat exportation of three regions, namely Canada, Australia and European community from 1985 to 1990.

The line graph elucidates the wheat exportation of three regions, namely Canada, Australia and European community from 1985 to 1990. EBdQ
The line graph elucidates the wheat exportation of three regions, namely Canada, Australia and European community from 1985 to 1990. As can be seen, Canada was the leader in wheat trading till 1988 and after that, the European Community became the leading wheat exporter among the given regions. Initially, in 1985, Canada exported the highest quantity of wheat which was approximately 19 million tonnes. The wheat export in this year by the European Community was about 17 million tonnes and finally, 15 million tonnes of wheat was traded by Australia in this year. Next year, only Australia managed to export more wheat than the previous year's quantity, while it declined in the case of Canada and the European Community. In the next two years (1987 and 1988) the amount of wheat exported by Canada rocketed and reached to 25 million tonnes while it was 15 million tonnes for the European Community and far less for Australia. In 1989, the amount of wheat export by Canada dropped very sharply while it was quite the opposite for the European Community. The final year's export figure shows that European Community shipped just over 20 million tonnes of wheat compared to Canada's just below 20 million tonnes. In this year Australia consigned just over 10 million tonnes of wheat.
The line graph elucidates the
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exportation of three regions,
namely
Canada, Australia and European
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community
from 1985 to 1990. As can be
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seen
, Canada was the leader in
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wheat
trading till 1988 and after that, the European
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Community
became the leading
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wheat
exporter among the
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given
regions.

Initially
, in 1985, Canada exported the highest quantity of
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wheat
which was approximately 19
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million
tonnes. The
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wheat
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export
in this
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year
by the European
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Community
was about 17
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million
tonnes and
finally
, 15
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million
tonnes of
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wheat
was traded
by Australia in this
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year
.
Next
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,
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only
Australia managed to
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export
more
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wheat
than the previous year's quantity, while it declined in the case of Canada and the European
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Community
. In the
next
two years (1987 and 1988) the amount of
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wheat
exported by Canada rocketed and reached to 25
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million
tonnes while it was 15
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million
tonnes for the European
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Community
and far less for Australia. In 1989, the amount of
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wheat
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export
by Canada dropped
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very
sharply
while it was quite the opposite for the European
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Community
. The final year's
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export
figure
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shows
that European
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Community
shipped
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just
over 20
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million
tonnes of
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wheat
compared to Canada's
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just
below 20
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million
tonnes. In this
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year
Australia consigned
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over 10
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IELTS academic The line graph elucidates the wheat exportation of three regions, namely Canada, Australia and European community from 1985 to 1990.

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