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The flow chart shows the recycling procedure of glass bottles

The flow chart shows the recycling procedure of glass bottles NBLy
The rendered process chart delineates the way in which recycling of glass bottles is done in the glass factory. As a general trend, recycling procedure is man'nade and contain seven cyclical phases, beginning with collection of bottles and culmination with formation of New bottles. In the ab initio step, the galss bottles are collected from public dustbins and separated according to its colour. After that, these are transported to recycling factory. The classification is done in the following step in which metal caps and plastic caps are removed. Then the glass of bottles is broken and again these are sent by lorry to glass factory where glass and raw material is furnaced at 1200 degree C. In the eventual step, with the help of melted mixture, a new bottles are made in the glass factory.
The rendered process chart delineates the way in which recycling of
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glass
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factory
. As a general trend, recycling procedure is
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and contain seven cyclical phases, beginning with collection of
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bottles
and culmination with formation of New
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bottles
. In the ab initio step, the
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galss
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bottles
are collected
from public dustbins and separated according to its
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colour
. After that, these
are transported
to recycling
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factory
. The classification
is done
in the following step in which metal caps and plastic caps
are removed
. Then the
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glass
of
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bottles
is broken
and again these are
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sent
by lorry to
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glass
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factory
where
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glass
and raw material is
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furnaced
at 1200 degree C. In the eventual step, with the
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help
of melted mixture, a new
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bottles
are made
in the
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glass
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factory
.
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IELTS academic The flow chart shows the recycling procedure of glass bottles

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