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The line graph shows the number of newly graduated students in the UK, while the bar chart compares their proportions in five different jobs occupied by them in 1992, 1997, and 2002.

The line graph illustrates the amount of freshly graduated students studying in the UK, whereas the bar chart shows a comparison between 5 different occupations occupied by them in 1992, 1997, and 2002. Overall, the number of new graduate student surged to a peak then dropped down slightly in year 1997 and 2002 respectively. In terms of employment, professional has been the most preferred job among freshers while sales being the least throughout the year.
The line graph illustrates the amount of
freshly
graduated students studying in the UK,

whereas the bar chart
shows
a comparison between 5
different
occupations occupied by them in 1992, 1997, and 2002.

Overall
, the number of new graduate student surged to a peak then
dropped down
slightly
in year 1997 and 2002
respectively
. In terms of employment,

professional has been the most preferred job among freshers while sales being the least throughout the year.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows the number of newly graduated students in the UK, while the bar chart compares their proportions in five different jobs occupied by them in 1992, 1997, and 2002.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
75 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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