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The bar charts give information about the reason why the students choose to study and how the companies support them about time off and fees. Information is divided by age group.

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The bar charts give information about the reason why the students choose to study and how the companies support them about time off and fees. Information is divided by age group. Overall, the number of students studying for their career was generally higher than those who study for interest in all age groups except for people at the age of 49 and over. It is also noticeable that the students at the age of below 26 were the age group that received the most support from their employers. At 80% of students in the age group under 26 studied for their career in the future while merely 10% of those studies for interest. In the older age groups, 70% of 26-29 years old students and 58% of 30-39 years old students say that careers play an important role, whereas people over 49 years old mainly study because of interest, at 70%. At the age of 40-49, career and interest are matching at 40%. Regarding support, they were received from companies, over a half of people who are under 30 say that they get support from their owners, specifically 62% of the interviews are under 26 and 50% of 26-29. This percentage reduces with the increase of age, merely 32% of people who are in the 30-39 age group get support from the employers while two groups older get a bit more support than age group 30-39, 38% of 40-49 and 45% of people at the age of over 49.
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IELTS academic The bar charts give information about the reason why the students choose to study and how the companies support them about time off and fees. Information is divided by age group.

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249 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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