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House owning for the owing

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Today owning a house has been a primary objective for people around the world. There are a variety of forms and shape for the house, but it comes with a price to play. You can choose to buy to make it completely yours or rent the house to save your fortune in a long term. In some countries, some people think that owning a house is better than renting one. In my opinion, I quite agree with this opinion. First of all, privacy when you acquire your own house you have the full right to do anything you desire such as decorating, planting even renovating the entire house on the other hand, when you rent the house you will be limited to do things with cautions. The reason for this case could come with many reasons. Firstly, privacy as I mentioned above this passage. Next is the safety of the owner. I must admit the fact that owning a house is tremendously safer than renting one because when you rent the place you’ll have to share or be under surveillance by a stranger. As a matter of fact, the crime that happens on the renting house significantly happens than the house that was completely bought. In my judgment, I think this is a positive position because you can use them in very long terms. You can even save the house for your children in the future but, you’ll have to make sure that owning the house of your own will not affect your financial state. For many years, there are a lot of families that has been in debt because of the house they bought. This situation is a major decision for every family to make a call if they fit for owning the house or not.
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has been a primary objective for
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people
around the world. There are a variety of forms and shape for the
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house
,
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it
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comes
with a price to play. You can choose to
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buy
to
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make
it completely yours or rent the
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house
to save your fortune in a long term.

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some
countries,
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some
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people
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think
that
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owning
a
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house
is better than renting one. In my opinion, I quite
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agree
with this opinion.
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First of all
, privacy when you acquire your
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own
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house
you have the full right to do anything you desire such as decorating, planting even renovating the entire
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house
on the other hand
, when you rent the
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you will
be limited
to do things with cautions.

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reasons.
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admit the fact that
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a
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is
tremendously
safer than renting one
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because
when you rent the place you’ll
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have to
share or be under surveillance by a stranger. As a matter of fact, the crime that happens on the renting
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house
significantly
happens than the
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house
that was completely
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bought
.

In my judgment, I
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this is a
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position
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you can
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use
them in
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long terms. You can even save the
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house
for your children in the future
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but
, you’ll
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have to
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make
sure that
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owning
the
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house
of your
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own
will not affect your financial state. For
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many
years, there are
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a lot of
families that has been in debt
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because
of the
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they
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bought
. This situation is a major decision for every family to
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make
a call if they fit for
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owning
the
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or not.
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IELTS academic House owning for the owing

Academic
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4 paragraphs
297 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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