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The line graph illustrates the past and projected population of India and China from 2000 to 2050, measured in five-yearly intervals.

The line graph illustrates the past and projected population of India and China from 2000 to 2050, measured in five-yearly intervals. AjqWe
The line graph illustrates the past and projected population of India and China from 2000 to 2050, measured in five-yearly intervals. As an overall trend, China’s population, which exceeded that of India by about 250 million in 2000, is expected to be surpassed by India in the early 2030s, and India is expected to become more populous than China by 200 million in 2050. Now, turning to the details, China’s population has risen steadily from 2000 at 1000 million to 2020 at 1400 million. However, it is projected to plateau at slightly above 1400 million from 2020 to the mid 2040s with a slight declining trend from 2030. This downward trend accelerates from 2040 and it will fall to just under 1400 million in 2050. In contrast, India’s population has shown more robust growth than China, between 2000 and 2020. After catching up with China at little over 1400 in 2030, India’s growth is projected to continue reaching as high as 1600 million in 2050. Although the rate of growth will become milder after mid 2020s, India’s upward trend seems to continue.
The line graph illustrates the past and projected
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population
of India and China from 2000 to 2050, measured in five-yearly intervals. As an
overall
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trend
, China’s
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population
, which exceeded that of India by about 250
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million
in 2000, is
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by India in the early 2030s, and India is
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to become more populous than China by 200
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in 2050.

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, China’s
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to 2020 at 1400
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from 2020 to the mid 2040s with a slight declining
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from 2030. This downward
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accelerates from 2040 and it will fall to
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under 1400
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has shown more robust growth than China, between 2000 and 2020. After catching up with China at
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over 1400 in 2030, India’s growth
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in 2050. Although the rate of growth will become milder after mid 2020s, India’s upward
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seems to continue.
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