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the line graph depicts the number of people touring a specific Caribean Island during the period of 2010 to 2017

the line graph depicts the number of people touring a specific Caribean Island during the period of 2010 to 2017 7PpNX

The line graph compares the number of visitors who went to the Caribbean Island and lived in cruise ships with those who leaved on the Island. It also aggregates the total number of visitors received from 2010 to 2017. In 2010 the total number of tourists was about 1 million with only about a quarter million staying on a cruise ship while the remaining three quarters lived on the island. The number of those who stayed on the cruise ships increased to around half a million in 2011 before taking a dive to a 250000 in 2012 then maintaining a steady rise over the years till 2017. the number of tourists who lived on island on the other hand barely changed in the period the first year of the study. In 2011 however the study recorded an increase in the number of guests to the resided on island till 2013 to a peak of 1. 5 million before the number remained constant till 2015 where it showed a decline to around 1. 25 millions before rising again to 1. 5 millionIn total, the number of tourists to this island regardless of their choice of residence kept increasing throughout the entire period of the survey.

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