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The line graph compares changes in the number of cars owned in British between 1975 and 2005.

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The line graph compares changes in the number of cars owned in British between 1975 and 2005. Overall, it is clear that car ownership increased during this period. Particularly, the percentage of households with no cars decreased, while the figure for households with 2 or 3 cars rose. As per information. In 1975, the highest proportion of car ownership per household in the UK was recorded in no car, accounting for 45 percent. However, this figure fell dramatically to just under 25 percent in 1985, and then declined sharply to 22 percent by the end of the period. In sharp contrast to this, the percentage of households with one car decreased significantly in 1985, with just under 40 percent. This figure then remained relatively constant at 45 percent. In contrast, fewer than 10 percent of households owned 2 cars in 1975, compared with about 3 percent which had 3 cars. Both figures then saw a steady increase. At the end of the period, 18 percent of households had 2 cars, and the proportion of households owned 3 cars increased dramatically in 2005, measuring at about 10 percent accordingly.
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owned
in British between 1975 and 2005.

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, it is
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clear
that
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car
ownership increased during this period.
Particularly
, the percentage of
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households
with no
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cars
decreased, while the
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figure
for
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households
with 2 or 3
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cars
rose.

As per information. In 1975, the highest proportion of
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car
ownership per
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household
in the UK
was recorded
in no
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car
, accounting for 45
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percent
.
However
, this
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figure
fell
dramatically
to
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just
under 25
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percent
in 1985, and then declined
sharply
to 22
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percent
by the
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end
of the period. In sharp contrast to this, the percentage of
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households
with one
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car
decreased
significantly
in 1985, with
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just
under 40
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percent
. This
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figure
then remained
relatively
constant at 45 percent.

In contrast
, fewer than 10
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percent
of
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households
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owned
2
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cars
in 1975, compared with about 3
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percent
which had 3
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cars
. Both
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figures
then
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saw
a steady increase. At the
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end
of the period, 18
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percent
of
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households
had 2
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cars
, and the proportion of
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households
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owned
3
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cars
increased
dramatically
in 2005, measuring at about 10
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accordingly
.

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