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the line graph below shows the stock price of four different technology companies from 2011 to 2016

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The line graph compares the stock cost of four various technology corporations namely, Facebook, Google, Apple, and Yahoo over a period of 6 years. It is clear that Apple’s stock price fluctuated wildly and saw the biggest rise in just one year, while Google remained relatively stable with the lowest numbers throughout the period. However, Facebook witnessed a gradual increase year by year and became the priciest company in 2016. In 2011, Apple started the period with a stock market value of around 4, 000 and rose dramatically to a peak of roughly 35, 000 in 2012. Just one year later the figure for Apple decrease dramatically to nearly 7, 000 and almost doubled again in the following year. Google witnessed a small rise to approximately 1, 000 in 2011 and remained at this level for the rest of the period. In 2011, Facebook’s value began at round 7. 500 and number grew up steadily in the following years to reach a peak of about 10, 000 in 2016, which was the highest value among three companies. By contrast, the stock cost of Yahoo declined from approximately 7, 000 in2011 to roughly 3, 000 in 2016.

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