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Sjsioqoqkaks hehwuiqoqoq hshshsuuw shshwhwkwknsbshshs hejwlappapswjwjwjajsn shshjskwk shs VEybD
The diagram compare Stokeford town in two years 1930 and 2010. Overall, there were farmlands and some houses in 1930, while map on the right illustrates that there were built new houses and some reconstructions. Regarding Stokeford in 1930, there were farmlands in both sides north and south of city. Another significant points are there were a big garden and a small primary school which were located east of main road, whereas some houses together with shops were located around the road. However, in 2010 the all shops and farmlands replaced with a plenty of houses. Similarly, a large gardens were recounstructed to be a retirement home, when the size of primary school was reduced. Another interesing point is that, only post office unchanged.
The diagram compare
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Stokeford
town in two years 1930 and 2010.

Overall
, there were farmlands and
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some
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houses
in 1930, while map on the right illustrates that there
were built
new
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houses
and
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some
reconstructions.

Regarding
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Stokeford
in 1930, there were farmlands in both sides north and south of city. Another significant points are there were a
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big
garden and a
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small
primary school which
were located
east of main road, whereas
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some
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houses
together with shops
were located
around the road.

However
, in 2010 the all shops and farmlands replaced with a
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plenty
of
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houses
.
Similarly
, a large
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gardens
were
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recounstructed
to be a retirement home, when the size of primary school was
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reduced
. Another
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point is that,
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post office unchanged.
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IELTS academic Sjsioqoqkaks hehwuiqoqoq hshshsuuw shshwhwkwknsbshshs hejwlappapswjwjwjajsn shshjskwk shs

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4 paragraphs
124 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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