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The chart shows the number of international students studying at a UK university between 1995 and 2015.

The chart shows the number of international students studying at a UK university between 1995 and 2015. QL2pL
The line graph illustrates the amount of students enrolled at a UK university from different continents in the world in a 20 year period. Evidently, there is an increasing trend among the students coming from Asia started with 60 in year 1995 doubled into 120 in 2015. Pupils from Europe closely followed, they have a total of 50 enrollees during the course of 20 years. Furthermore, the demand of students from North America begins with 40, which equates to the same number in first 5 years. Although there is a slight dip at year 2005, there is a sudden increase of 20 students in 2015. The least popular continent was Africa which they have a level number of 20 students in 15 years. Also, there is a significant rise of 10 more enrollees in 2010. However, in 2015, student decreases unexpectedly and went back to original state.
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students
coming from Asia
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1995 doubled into 120 in 2015. Pupils from Europe
closely
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during the course of 20 years.

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from North America
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begins
with 40, which equates to the same number in
first
5 years. Although there is a slight dip at
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2005, there is a sudden increase of 20
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students
in 2015.

The least popular continent was Africa which they have a level number of 20
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students
in 15 years.
Also
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enrollees
in 2010.
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, in 2015,
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decreases
unexpectedly
and went back to original state.
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