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The line chart gives information about the overseas visitors to the coast, the mountains, the lakes in a european country, over a course 21 years, starting from 1987.

The line chart gives information about the overseas visitors to the coast, the mountains, the lakes in a european country, over a course 21 years, starting from 1987. l73EK
The line chart gives information about the overseas visitors to the coast, the mountains, the lakes in a european country, over a course 21 years, starting from 1987. In general, a closer look at the line chart highlights the fact that the number of three areas witnessed upward trends. Also, the number of the mountains was lowest, throughout the period shown. Looking at the line chart in more detail, the number of the coast and the lakes were 40 thousands, 10 thousands in 1987, respectively. In 1992, the figure of the coast slightly fell to 35 thousands before significantly grew to around 75 thousands in 2007 while that of the lakes also subtantially climbed by 65 thousands in 2002 before notably declined to 50 thousands in 2007. Meanwhile, the number of the mountains slightly rose from 20 thousands in 1987 to around 35 thousands in the end of the period.
The line chart gives information about the overseas visitors to the coast, the mountains, the lakes in a
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european
country, over a course 21 years, starting from 1987.

In general
, a closer look at the line chart highlights the fact that the
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number
of three areas witnessed upward trends.
Also
, the
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number
of the mountains was lowest, throughout the period shown.

Looking at the line chart in more detail, the
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number
of the coast and the lakes were 40 thousands, 10 thousands in 1987,
respectively
. In 1992, the figure of the coast
slightly
fell to 35 thousands
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before
significantly
grew to around 75 thousands in 2007 while that of the lakes
also
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subtantially
climbed by 65 thousands in 2002
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before
notably
declined to 50 thousands in 2007.

Meanwhile, the
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number
of the mountains
slightly
rose from 20 thousands in 1987 to around 35 thousands in the
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end
of the period.
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IELTS academic The line chart gives information about the overseas visitors to the coast, the mountains, the lakes in a european country, over a course 21 years, starting from 1987.

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