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The given table illustrates the sales at a small restaurant located in the downtown business district from October 7-13.

The given table illustrates the sales at a small restaurant located in the downtown business district from October 7-13. OVy7y
The given table illustrates the sales at a small restaurant located in the downtown business district from October 7-13. Overall, dinner prices were much higher than lunch. Firstly, the maximum price of lunch sales was on Wednesday which was equal to 2595$, and the minimum price was on Sunday at 1550$. As it seen on Weekdays prices rise until Wednesday then fall gradually from Thursday(2375$) to Sunday(1550$). But on Thursday the price goes up a little. To add to it, prices are much lower than on weekdays. On the other hand, the greatest price for dinner was on Friday with 4350$ the price significantly changed than others and the lowest price was Sunday which was equal to 2450$. Also, prices from Monday to Friday slowly increased as it was in such started from 3623$ to 4350$. After Friday price are significantly changed on Saturday In one word, sales on weekdays were a bit higher than in dinner meanwhile when prices are also higher
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table illustrates the sales at a
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small
restaurant located in the downtown business district from October 7-13.
Overall
, dinner
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prices
were much higher than lunch.

Firstly
, the maximum
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price
of lunch sales was on Wednesday which was equal to
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$2595".
2595$
, and the minimum
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price
was on Sunday at
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$1550".
1550$
. As it
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seen
on Weekdays
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prices
rise until Wednesday then fall
gradually
from Thursday(
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2375$
) to Sunday(
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1550$
).
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But
on Thursday the
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price
goes up a
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little
. To
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add
to it,
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prices
are much lower than on weekdays.

On the other hand
, the greatest
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price
for dinner was on Friday with
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4350$
the
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price
significantly
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changed
than others and the lowest
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price
was Sunday which was equal to
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2450$
.
Also
,
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prices
from Monday to Friday
slowly
increased as it was in such
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started
from
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$3623".
3623$
to
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4350$
. After Friday
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price
are
significantly
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changed
on Saturday

In one word, sales on weekdays were a bit higher than in dinner meanwhile when
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prices
are
also
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higher
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IELTS academic The given table illustrates the sales at a small restaurant located in the downtown business district from October 7-13.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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