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The graph below shows the consumption of meat in Spain between 2001 and 2011.

The graph below shows the consumption of meat in Spain between 2001 and 2011. 2baJM
The line graph illustrates the number of consumption in five types of meat from 2001 to 2011 in Spain. Overall, it is clearly seen that beef was the most popular meat at the beginning of the period. However, veal and goat showed relatively stable trends throughout the whole period. In detail, Spain people most consumed beef which was just over 700 grams per person and a week. However, between 2001 and 2007, the figure declined to less than 400 grams. Duck consumption was just below 500 grams in 2001, it dropped by about 100 grams until 2007. Consumption of chicken showed similar trends with duck meat in 2001, it climbed sharply to around 800 grams. Furthermore, pork consumption increased to just over 500 from 300 grams during 6-year period. On the other hand, people who live in Spain consumed veal and goat both similar amount per week, which was 200 grams and 100 grams in 2001, after 6 years later, both decreased to under 200 grams. After 2007, chicken consumption keep increased to 900 grams but pork consumption remained stable. Consumption of beef climbed to just below 500 grams in 2011. Lastly, consumption of goat and veal showed relatively stable trends over the period. The consumption of these meats was 100 grams and 200grams each and this two proportion is the same amount with 2001.
The line graph illustrates the number of
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in five types of
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meat
from 2001 to 2011 in Spain.

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clearly
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that beef was the most popular
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meat
at the beginning of the period.
However
, veal and goat
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showed
relatively
stable trends throughout the whole period.

In detail, Spain
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people
most consumed beef which was
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over 700
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grams
per person and a week.
However
, between 2001 and 2007, the figure declined to less than 400 grams.

Duck
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was
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just
below 500
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grams
in 2001, it dropped by about 100
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grams
until 2007.
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Consumption
of chicken
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showed
similar trends with duck
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meat
in 2001, it climbed
sharply
to around 800
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grams
.
Furthermore
, pork
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consumption
increased to
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just
over 500 from 300
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grams
during 6-year period.

On the other hand
,
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who
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live
in Spain consumed veal and goat both similar amount per week, which was 200
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grams
and 100
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in 2001, after 6 years later, both decreased to under 200 grams.

After 2007, chicken
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keep
increased to 900
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grams
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but
pork
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consumption
remained stable.

Consumption of beef climbed to
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below 500
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grams
in 2011.
Lastly
,
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consumption
of goat and veal
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showed
relatively
stable trends over the period. The
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of these
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meats
was 100
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grams
and
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200grams
each and this two proportion is the same amount with 2001.

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