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The illustration This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with: demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplaysshows how a hydroelectric electricity plant generates power. Overall, power is generated during the day when water is released from a dam, and then at night, the water is pumped back to the dam. Looking first at the daytime operation, this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with: initiatescommencesbegins when water flows down a river to a high-level water storage facility with a dam. Next, the water passes through an intake of the dam and to a hydropower station. Subsequently, the water turns turbines which feeds power to the National Grid. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with: expirationend of the daytime, the water ends up in a low-level reservoir. The nighttime operation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with: initiatesstarts with the turbines being reversed and water being pumped from the low-level reservoir. This water is then pumped up to the dam and into the high-level reservoir. All the water stays in the high-level reservoir This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with: due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact thatowing to the fact that the intake to the dam is closed.

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