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The graphs below show the post school qualification held by canadians in the age group 25 to 35 and 45 to 55

The graphs below show the post school qualification held by canadians in the age group 25 to 35 and 45 to 55 25EKX
The blend of pie chart illustrate the post education centric qualification organised by canadians in the different age factors between 25 to 30 and 45 to 55 the data is calibrated in percentageOverall, it is lucid that in age group 25 to 35 the maximum students hold degree in administration subject analyst bus MBA and other subject received degree by age group 45 to 55 At first glance, age group 25 to 30 the 15% couples hold degree in education and in age group 45 to 55 the percentages was decreased was 13%. however, in social science arts stream learners hold degree ratio was remains same in both age group. In age group 25 to 35 almost 1 in 10 student was completed degree in science math computer as compared to in age group 45 to 55 the percentile was increased it was 18 %. Additionally, in age group 25 to 35 to 35 to 45 the less majority of mantee hold degree in communities nursing MBA and other fields in both age groups. whilst, in age group 25 to 35 and 45 to 55 the training hold degree in engineering it was in 9% and 19% respectively.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the post school qualification held by canadians in the age group 25 to 35 and 45 to 55

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