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2.The table shows oil production in Africa countries from 2000 to 2004 ( unit: barrels) .Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

2. The table shows oil production in Africa countries from 2000 to 2004 ( unit: barrels). p5Na2
The table illustrates data about the oil produced in Africa between 2000 and 2004. Overal, while the oil production of Nigeria, Chad and Somali increased, the opposite is true for Congo over the 5 year period. Moreover, Nigeria had the most barrels of oil during the research period. On the one hand, Nigeria was a country that had oil produced gradually gained and reached the highest number, at 278000 in 2004, while the number for Chad was the lowest in the past 3 years, it significantly grew to the second country having the most oil produced, at 220000 in 2004. On the other hand, Congo and Somalia had the lower numbers compared to the other country. Congo dropped the production of oil and reached the lowest number of 1500 while the oil produced by Somalia increased to 15000 in 2004
The table illustrates data about the
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in Africa between 2000 and 2004.

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, while the
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production of Nigeria, Chad and Somali increased, the opposite is true for Congo over the
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5 year
period.
Moreover
, Nigeria had the most barrels of
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oil
during the research period.

On the one hand, Nigeria was a country that had
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oil
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produced
gradually
gained and reached the highest
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number
, at 278000 in 2004, while the
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number
for Chad was the lowest in the past 3 years, it
significantly
grew to the second country having the most
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oil
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produced
, at 220000 in 2004.

On the other hand
, Congo and Somalia had the lower
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numbers
compared to the other country. Congo dropped the production of
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and reached the lowest
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number
of 1500 while the
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produced
by Somalia increased to 15000 in 2004
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IELTS academic 2. The table shows oil production in Africa countries from 2000 to 2004 ( unit: barrels).

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