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The chart below shows the number and the purpose of trips made by men and women in a certain European country in 2017.

The chart below shows the number and the purpose of trips made by men and women in a certain European country in 2017. 0nG6B
The horizontal bar graph reveals the information regarding purpose of trips made by males and females along with the number of them in a particular nation of Europe in the year 2017. To commence with, it can be evident that highest number of men travel to work about 325 approximately while, average 210 women traveling for the same. Shopping was mostly preferred by females in European country with roughly 270 and less than 200 males went for shopping. Surprisingly, both ganders had almost similar amount of trips to visiting the friends with slightly higher number of women. Meanwhile, males was more indulge in sports activities with 140 and 130 females respectively. The least trips was made by all of them to day trip, into which women were less than 20 and men were accountable for merely 10 more in terms of data. It is deduced that, majority of males spend more time in traveling to work. while, females were more interesting in spending time at shopping
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along with the number of them in a particular nation of Europe in the year 2017.

To commence with, it can be evident that highest number of
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men
travel to work about 325 approximately while, average 210 women traveling for the same. Shopping was
mostly
preferred by
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females
in European country with roughly 270 and less than 200
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males
went for shopping.

Surprisingly
, both ganders had almost similar amount of
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trips
to visiting the friends with
slightly
higher number of women. Meanwhile,
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males
was more indulge in sports activities with 140 and 130
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females
respectively
. The least
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trips
was made
by all of them to day
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trip
, into which women were less than 20 and
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men
were accountable for
merely
10 more in terms of data.

It
is deduced
that, majority of
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males
spend more time in traveling to work.
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while
,
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were more interesting in spending time at shopping
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number and the purpose of trips made by men and women in a certain European country in 2017.

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