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chart shows the crime rates in three different part of Newport city centre

chart shows the crime rates in three different part of Newport city centre PgjrB

The chart illustrates the number of incidents that took place in the areas of Newport city centre namely, burglary, car theft and robbery between the years 2003 and 2012. Overall, there had been a significant decline in the cases of burglary from 2003 to 2008. Then there were fluctuations in the incidents of car theft. The cases that were reported from the robbery were the lowest over the same period with mild fluctuations.

The chart illustrates the number of incidents that took place in the areas of Newport city Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
namely
, burglary, car theft and robbery between the years 2003 and 2012.

Overall
, there had been a significant decline in the cases of burglary from 2003 to 2008. Then there were fluctuations in the incidents of car theft. The cases that were reported
 from the robbery were the lowest over the same period with mild fluctuations. 

IELTS academic chart shows the crime rates in three different part of Newport city centre

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American English

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73 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

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