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The picture below shows the changes over 50 yaers in Andijan.

The picture below shows the changes over 50 yaers in Andijan. 95J6x
The given pictures illustrate the layout of Andijan in 1970 and also show the changes over 5 decades. It can be seen that the area developed a lot and become a city centre in a half of century. Initially, Andijan was a green city with lots of trees nad flowers. It can be seen in the first picture the area was divided into four parts by local roads and amidst of the circulary for cars. In the north side of circulary was a big Govermental Hospital which is covered with full of trees and roses. In front of the clinil there were microdistrict. In the south side of circulary was a small forest and near to it Medical institute. In the west side of circulary was a small village which is circled with trees. According to the first map Andijan was more enriched with oxygen than 2020 year. A lot of changes can be seen in the present view of Andijan. The clinic has walled on all four sides with two gates, one towards the west and the one towards the south. Next change was in circulary. It was totally demolished and car roads connected with each other. Additionally, in order to simplify and has not to make a traffic jam in four sides of main road have built additional roads only to right movement. Within five decades around the clinic have constructed full of new buildings. Medical Institute has renovated and besides of the institute has been building newest covered area. In the left side of the ASMI (Andijan State Medical Institute) have built sport college and a very big football stadium. On the outside of it has fountains. There were built instead of a small forest. Opposite of fountains have put a public TV which demonstrates various types of short advertisements. A small village has taken over to college and private hospitals. Many shops have opened from below of stadium. Overall, Andijan developed into a busy commercial town over a period of half century.
The
given
pictures illustrate the layout of
Andijan
in 1970 and
also
show
the
changes
over 5 decades. It can be
seen
that the area developed a lot and become a city
centre
in a half of century.

Initially
,
Andijan
was a green city with lots of trees
nad
flowers. It can be
seen
in the
first
picture the area
was divided
into four parts by local
roads
and amidst of the
circulary
for cars. In the north side of
circulary
was a
big
Govermental
Hospital which
is covered
with full of trees and roses. In front of the
clinil
there were
microdistrict
.
In
the south side of
circulary
was a
small
forest and near to it Medical institute.
In
the west side of
circulary
was a
small
village which
is circled
with trees. According to the
first
map
Andijan
was more enriched with oxygen than 2020 year.

A lot of
changes
can be
seen
in the present view of
Andijan
. The clinic has walled on all four
sides
with two gates, one towards the west and the one towards the south.
Next
change
was in
circulary
. It was
totally
demolished and car
roads
connected with each other.
Additionally
, in order to simplify and has not to
make
a traffic jam in four
sides
of main
road
have built additional
roads
only
to right movement. Within five decades around the clinic have constructed full of new buildings. Medical Institute has renovated and
besides
of the institute has been building
newest
covered area. In the
left
side of the
ASMI
(
Andijan
State Medical Institute) have built sport college and a
very
big
football stadium. On the outside of it has fountains. There
were built
instead
of a
small
forest. Opposite of fountains have put a public TV which demonstrates various types of short advertisements. A
small
village has taken over to college and private hospitals.
Many
shops have opened from below of stadium.

Overall
,
Andijan
developed into a busy commercial town over a period of half century.
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