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The graph shows the highest energy production of some Europe countries from 1995 to 2010

The graph shows the highest energy production of some Europe countries from 1995 to 2010 Wm1Lq
The line graph gives information about energy production the highest of Sweden, France, Denmark and Germany over a 15 period, 1995 to 2010 in percentage. Overall it can be seen that four countries decreased over the years but finally some countries increased slightly the energy production. Denmark and Germany produced the most energy. They stood at a fairly similar level of between percentage of energy produced 60 and 56 in 1995. The energy produced from the two countries drop sharply over the following six years. But energy produced from Denmark decline significant in 2010
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production the highest of Sweden, France, Denmark and Germany over a 15 period, 1995 to 2010 in percentage.
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production. Denmark and Germany
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60 and 56 in 1995. The
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from the two countries drop
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from Denmark decline significant in 2010
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IELTS academic The graph shows the highest energy production of some Europe countries from 1995 to 2010

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