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The graph shows the differencies in wheat export over the three areas

The graph shows the differencies in wheat export over the three areas bYxrB

The line graph compares information on the amount of wheat exported in 3 regions From 1985 to 1990. Units are measured in millions of tonnes. To summarize, it is clearly seen that Canada and European Community witnessed an upward trend. In contrast, there was a noticeable decrease in Australia's cereal export over a 5-year period. Turning into details, in 1985 there was a slight difference in the amount of grass which was exported from Canada and European Community, accounting for 19 and 17 thousand tonnes respectively. Between 1986 and 1988, Canada showed a significant rise regarding exported wheat and hit its peak point of 25 before dramatic decrease to 14 in the following year. In contrast, at that time European Community began to send much more grass abroad and reached approximately 18 trillion of tonnes in 1989. On the other hand, in 1985 the figure of exported wheat in Australia was the lowest (15 million tonnes) among these three regions. Despite a small growth by 2 million tones to 17 from 1985 to 1986, Australia followed a downward trend till 1989. Commencing from 1989 to 1990, the proportion of cereal exported from Australia leveled out at 11, while other regions showed an increasing pattern.

The line graph compares information on the amount of wheat You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
exported
 in 3 regions

From 1985 to 1990. Units are measured
 in millions of tonnes.

To summarize
, it is clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that Canada and European Community witnessed an upward trend. In contrast
, there was a noticeable decrease in Australia's cereal export over a 5-year period.

Turning into This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, in 1985 there was a slight difference in the amount of grass which was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
exported
 from Canada and European Community, accounting for 19 and 17 thousand tonnes respectively
. Between 1986 and 1988, Canada This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 a significant rise regarding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
exported
 wheat and hit its peak point of 25 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 dramatic decrease to 14 in the following year. In contrast
, at that time European Community began to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 much more grass abroad and reached approximately 18 trillion of tonnes in 1989. On the other hand
, in 1985 the figure of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
exported
 wheat in Australia was the lowest (15 million tonnes) among these three regions. Despite a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 growth by 2 million tones to 17 from 1985 to 1986, Australia followed a downward trend till 1989. Commencing from 1989 to 1990, the proportion of cereal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
exported
 from Australia leveled out at 11, while other regions This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 an increasing pattern. 