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the graph shows overage annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 to 2010

The supplied illustration of the line graph delineates average yearly consumption on mobile and home phone services in 9 years from 2001 to 2010. The data calibrated in dollars. Overall, it is obvious that the usage of landline phone services deteriorate ceaselessly over the 10 year period, while cell phone services expenditures upsurge hurriedly. It is conspicuous that in the year 2001 the average consumption of residential phone services was a mere $700, while on a mobile phone it was only a little more than $200. Nevertheless, over the five years, landline phones use had declined steadily by nearly $200, and simultaneously cell phones use had soared substantially by about $300. Furthermore, there was a similar average spent for both various phone service in 2006, just over $500. At the end of the period, residential phone service expenditure had experienced its minimum (nearly $400). In constant, it was the most popular usage time frame for mobile phone services, in 2010 average customers spent a little more than $700.

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