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The graph show about the monthly average temperature and rainfall of a particular area of the world.

The graph show about the monthly average temperature and rainfall of a particular area of the world. GrWwx
The given line and bar graph depicts the information about the monthly average temperature and rainfall of a particular area of the world. The data is calibrated in mm and °c. Overall, it is lucid that the maximum mm in bar graph in July in the mid of month whereas, the highest temperature in line graph in the month may. Turning to detail, in rainfall, the precipitation(mm) escalated considerably to 335 in July from 320 mm in August. It dwindled significantly to 270 mm in September then it decrease by 30 mm in June as compared to spetember. It shows overall declining trend fork January to April. In may, the rainfall of a particular area around 100 mm then there is considered rise in october at around 150 mm. In November and December it decline as compare to other month at near about 10 mm respectively. Probing further, In temperature, it hovered around 20 to 30°c form January to December. It start from 20°c in January then it incline and reach at near by 30°c until May. It shows declining trend in two months around 25°c then small amount of temperature is increasing till october. From November to December reach its bottom at 20°c respectively.
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line and bar graph depicts the information about the monthly average
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temperature
and rainfall of a particular area of the world. The data
is calibrated
in mm and
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°c
.
Overall
, it is lucid that the maximum mm in bar graph in July in the mid of
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month
whereas, the highest
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temperature
in line graph in the
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month
may. Turning to detail, in rainfall, the precipitation(mm) escalated
considerably
to 335 in July from 320 mm in August. It dwindled
significantly
to 270 mm in September then it
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decrease
by 30 mm in June as compared to
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spetember
. It
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shows
overall
declining trend fork January to April. In
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may
, the rainfall of a particular area
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around
100 mm then there
is considered
rise in
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october
at
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around
150 mm. In November and December it
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decline
as compare to other
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month
at near about 10 mm
respectively
. Probing
further
, In
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temperature
, it hovered
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around
20 to 30°c form January to December. It
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start
from 20°c in January then it
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incline
and reach at
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near by
30°c until May. It
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shows
declining trend in two
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months
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around
25°c then
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small
amount of
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temperature
is increasing till
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october
. From November to December reach its bottom at 20°c
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The graph show about the monthly average temperature and rainfall of a particular area of the world.

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