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The graph illustrates the average daily temperatures(max and min) and rainfall(mm) in London throughout the year from January till December.

The graph illustrates the average daily temperatures(max and min) and rainfall(mm) in London throughout the year from January till December. 7JQj6

The graph illustrates the average daily temperatures(max and min) and rainfall(mm) in London throughout the year from January till December. Overall, the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures show a similar trend for the whole year, while the rainfall experienced fluctuations. As can be seen from the graph, the temperature rose significantly for the first six months starting from January and reach its peak in the month of July to around 22 degrees Celsius, where maximum and minimum remained constant for the next three months. However, it declined steadily from September till December, which accounted for under 10 degrees Celsius, thus, marked the same temperature at the start of the year. On the other hand, it is apparent from the graph that for January around 55mm of rainfall was recorded which slightly decreased by 10mm from Feb-Apr. Furthermore, it fluctuated during upcoming months and the highest rainfall was noted in November almost 65mm which dropped by 10mm at the end of the year.

The graph illustrates the average daily temperatures(max and min) and rainfall(mm) in London throughout the year from January till December.

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end
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IELTS academic The graph illustrates the average daily temperatures(max and min) and rainfall(mm) in London throughout the year from January till December.

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