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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows tourism statistics among Venezuelan students from 2011 to 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows tourism statistics among Venezuelan students from 2011 to 2014. RkeL8
The above line graph depicts the most desired tourism spot by Venezuelan students from 2011-2014. It is lucid from the given figure that Paris was the least favorite destination for students in 2011 which changed over the course of years and was the most visited spot in 2013. In 2014, most students preferred traveling to London. Nearly 18000 students travelled to Rome in 2011 which is the highest amongst all three while Paris witnessed 10000 visitors. The number of students visiting Paris gradually increased from 10000 to approximately 14000 students in 2012. The number further increased to 20000 in 2013. The number of students visiting Rome sharply reduced in 2012 to 13000 students then rose again for the consecutive year to 17000 students. The graph again went down for visitors in Rome to 16000. The number of students visiting London gradually increased from 15000 to 19000 students which is observed to be the highest number in 2014. All in all, the travelers going to London moderately increased over the years whereas in the other two countries, the graph is a but erratic and undergoes sharp changes.
The above line graph depicts the most desired tourism spot by Venezuelan
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from 2011-2014. It is lucid from the
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figure that Paris was the least favorite destination for
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students
in 2011 which
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over the course of years and was the most visited spot in 2013. In 2014, most
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students
preferred traveling to London.

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18000
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travelled to Rome in 2011 which is the highest amongst all three while Paris witnessed 10000 visitors. The
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number
of
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students
visiting Paris
gradually
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increased
from 10000 to approximately 14000
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students
in 2012. The
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further
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to 20000 in 2013.

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The
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visiting Rome
sharply
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in 2012 to 13000
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students
then rose again for the consecutive year to 17000
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The
graph again went down for visitors in Rome to 16000.
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The
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number
of
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students
visiting London
gradually
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increased
from 15000 to 19000
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students
which
is observed
to be the highest
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in 2014.

All in all, the travelers going to London
moderately
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increased
over the years whereas in the other two countries, the graph is a
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erratic and undergoes sharp
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changes
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IELTS academic The graph below shows tourism statistics among Venezuelan students from 2011 to 2014.

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