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the average hours worked by part-time and full-time men and women in three countries in Europe in 2012.

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The tables illustrate the Average amount of worked time by part-time and full-time male and female in three differents countries in Europe which was Greece, Netherland and UK and compare them with the average time worked in part of European in 2002. Overall the two kinds of jobs shows the European average worked full-time has high number however Greece placed the first become the highest average jobs full time and part time. In 2002 and the lowest average number of part-time and full time jobs by two genders were in the UK. It can be seen that, In 2002 the average of European countries was 39. 2 for women and 40. 4 for men. Greece took first place to be the highest median of times for full-time and part-time jobs by different genders in European Countries which was 39. 9 for female and 42. 5 for men. Netherlands and UK have a significant rate for full time and part time by women 38. 0 and 37, men 30. 0 and 37. 5 for full time in addition women has 29. 2 and 28, men has 28. 3 and 29 for part time.
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