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The graph illustrates the amount of money customers spend on three different categories in five countries in 2002.

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The graph illustrates the amount of money customers spend on three different categories in five countries in 2002. It can be observed the percentage of expenditure in Food/ Drinks, and Tobacco were the largest out of the three categories. Turkey has the largest figure of money consumers spend when compared with other countries. People in Turkey spend the largest money on Food Drinks and Tobacco about 32% which is twofold of the money Sweden customers spent in 2002. In Clothing and Footwear item, the money Italian spending was notieciably different with all the rest countries (9%). The money percentage customers spending on Clothing and Footwear in Ireland, Spain, and Turkey approximatetly equivalent in 2002 ( 6, 43%, 6, 51%, 6, 63% respectively). In all five countries in 2002, people spent lowest amount in Leisure and education items. The highest money customer spent in Leisure and Education belong to Turkey about 4%. Whereas, the lowest amount was spent is Spain which only 1, 98%.
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the percentage of expenditure in Food/ Drinks, and Tobacco were the largest out of the three categories. Turkey has the largest figure of
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consumers spend when compared with other countries.

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in Turkey spend the largest
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on Food Drinks and Tobacco about 32% which is twofold of the
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Sweden
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in 2002. In Clothing and Footwear item, the
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Italian spending was
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with all the rest countries (9%).

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percentage
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spending on Clothing and Footwear in Ireland, Spain, and Turkey
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approximatetly
equivalent in 2002
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6, 43%, 6, 51%, 6, 63%
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amount in Leisure and education items. The highest
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in Leisure and Education belong to Turkey about 4%. Whereas, the lowest amount was
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is Spain which
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