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In the past, shopping was a rountain household chore, but nowadays many people consider it as a hobby

In the past, shopping was a rountain household chore, but nowadays many people consider it as a hobby 708jb
Almost many people in the past shoppig was a rountain household chore becouse in the past have so much few markets so shopping was rountain household for people. Earlier people have a much work at household so shopping was a rountain hosehold chore for they. Then they considered it as ahobby. Becouse house work is easyer for people. This is good becouse as humanssalling want things. Nowadays many people consider hoppin as a hobby. This is positive becose people often go to the market and they see a different things. This is coused salling to cheep. In the other hands, this is negative becouse people become leazy. So they well do much household works. To conclude, Many people cosidered it as a hobbies is good than it was rountain household chore.
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IELTS academic In the past, shopping was a rountain household chore, but nowadays many people consider it as a hobby

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