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The graph compares four countries, namely Australia, Sweden, Iceland and Turkey, in terms of renewable energy contributed to total energy supply over a period of thirteen years, during 1997 and 2010.

The graph compares four countries, namely Australia, Sweden, Iceland and Turkey, in terms of renewable energy contributed to total energy supply over a period of thirteen years, during 1997 and 2010. 8GPew
The graph compares four countries, namely Australia, Sweden, Iceland and Turkey, in terms of renewable energy contributed to total energy supply over a period of thirteen years, during 1997 and 2010. Overall, Sweden and Iceland experienced/witnessed an upward trend in three examined years. It can be clearly seen that this type of energy was most ubiquitous/ stood out/ be the dominant in Iceland. In 1997, nearly a half of energy in Iceland came from natural resources, which continued a ten-percent climb in 2000 and reached a peak at 70% in the next decade. Meanwhile, only approximately 5% of the entire amount of energy produced was generated from natural resources in Sweden, who experienced a similar trend to that of Iceland in regards to the proportion of renewable energy produced. Regarding Australia, the energy supply from nature possessed 9% in 1997 and the figure showed a decline around 5% in 2000 and 3% in 2010. Similarly, Turkey decreased from 37% in 1997 down to 35% in 2010.
The graph compares four countries,
namely
Australia, Sweden, Iceland and Turkey, in terms of renewable
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energy
contributed to total
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energy
supply over a period of thirteen years, during 1997 and 2010.

Overall
, Sweden and Iceland experienced/witnessed an upward trend in three examined years. It can be
clearly
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seen
that this type of
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energy
was most ubiquitous/ stood out/ be the dominant in Iceland.

In 1997,
nearly
a half of
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energy
in Iceland came from natural resources, which continued a ten-percent climb in 2000 and reached a peak at 70% in the
next
decade. Meanwhile,
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only
approximately 5% of the entire amount of
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energy
produced
was generated
from natural resources in Sweden, who experienced a similar trend to that of Iceland
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in regards to
the proportion of renewable
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energy
produced.

Regarding Australia, the
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energy
supply from nature possessed 9% in 1997 and the figure
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showed
a decline around 5% in 2000 and 3% in 2010.
Similarly
, Turkey decreased from 37% in 1997 down to 35% in 2010.

IELTS academic The graph compares four countries, namely Australia, Sweden, Iceland and Turkey, in terms of renewable energy contributed to total energy supply over a period of thirteen years, during 1997 and 2010.

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