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Some people think that they keep all money which is earn. And not pay taxed to the state. What extend do you agree or disagree?

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Irrefutably, in this cutting edge epoch, there is no denying conviction that occurrence of money which is earned by masses, is ubiquitous across the globe due to its paramount importance. Several individuals urge that they keep their money which they access from their work and not pay tax. This issue is now becoming more contentious. Nonetheless, l firmly disagree with above rubric. This essay will shed light on my stand points in subsequently paragraph. To embark with the myriad of reasons which are responsible of not paying taxes. The first and foremost stem from the fact that underprivileged masses cannot pay taxes, owing to poverty. They face ample of difficulties with fulfill the needs of home. That's the reason, why they cannot pay taxes.

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, in this cutting edge epoch, there is no denying conviction that occurrence of money which is earned
 by masses, is ubiquitous across the globe due to its paramount importance. Several individuals urge that they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 their money which they access from their work and not pay You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutylevyfinepriceratecost
tax
. This issue is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 becoming more contentious. Nonetheless, l firmly
 disagree with above rubric. This essay will shed light on my stand points in subsequently
 paragraph. To embark with the myriad of reasons which are The usual collocations for "responsible" is "responsible for". Did you mean "responsible for" or "in charge of"?responsible forin charge of
responsible of
 not paying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutylevyfinepriceratecost
taxes
. The first
 and foremost stem from the fact that underprivileged masses cannot pay You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutylevyfinepriceratecost
taxes
, owing to poverty. They face ample of difficulties with fulfill the needs of home. That's the reason, why they cannot pay You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutylevyfinepriceratecost
taxes
. 

IELTS academic Some people think that they keep all money which is earn. And not pay taxed to the state. What extend

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