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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Bkg9
The pie charts indicate the percentage of how customer service of Parkway Hotel was in 2005 and 2010. The questionaire was given to 100 visitors in both year. Overall, it is clear from the chart that Parkway Hotel had improved their service due to fact that excellent and good rating were increased, while poor and very poor rating were decreased in 2010. In 2005, nearly 50% of visitors who did the questionaire gave a satisfactory rating to hotel's customer service. Poor rating was also made up a significant proportion with 20% whereas there were almost the same level of very poor and good rating at 15% and 14%, respectively. Excellent rating was only at 5% In contrast, customer service of this hotel was improved in 2010 since the good rating was climbed up to 39% follow by the excellent rating at 28%. Furthermore, the poor rating was fallen to 12% and the very poor was under 5%
The pie charts indicate the percentage of how customer
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service
of Parkway Hotel was in 2005 and 2010. The
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questionaire
was
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given
to 100 visitors in both year.

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, it is
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clear
from the chart that Parkway Hotel had
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improved
their
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service
due to fact that excellent and
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good
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rating
were increased
, while
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poor
and
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very
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poor
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rating
were decreased
in 2010.

In 2005,
nearly
50% of visitors who did the
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gave a satisfactory
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rating
to hotel's customer
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service
.
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Poor
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rating
was
also
made up a significant proportion with 20% whereas there were almost the same level of
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very
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poor
and
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good
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rating
at 15% and 14%,
respectively
. Excellent
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rating
was
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only
at 5%

In contrast
, customer
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service
of this hotel was
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improved
in 2010 since the
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good
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rating
was climbed
up to 39% follow by the excellent
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rating
at 28%.
Furthermore
, the
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poor
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rating
was fallen
to 12% and the
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very
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poor
was under 5%
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IELTS academic The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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