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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. gVJL
The graph illustrates the amount of tourist visiting to Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. Overall, at the beginning of the period were visitors staying on cruise ships which have increased considerably with ups and downs. Eventually, the graph has recovered from 0. 25 to 1. 5 millions of visitors. There were visitors staying on island which had improved moderately from 0. 75 to 1. 5. To sum up total of tourists have grown steeply and moved 3. 5 millions of visitors in 2017. In the first graph there were visitors staying on cruise ships accounted for 0. 25 millions of travellers. Furthermore, there was a considerable increase from 0. 25 to 1. 25 during 2010 and 2015, however, we can see that number of visitors staying on cruise ships climbed gradually, at the end of the period stood at 2 millions of members.
The graph illustrates the amount of tourist visiting
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to Caribbean
island from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, at the beginning of the period were
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visitors
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staying
on cruise ships which have increased
considerably
with ups and downs.
Eventually
, the graph has recovered from 0. 25 to 1. 5
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millions
of
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visitors
. There were
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visitors
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staying
on island which had
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improved
moderately
from 0. 75 to 1. 5. To sum up total of tourists have grown
steeply
and
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moved
3. 5
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millions
of
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visitors
in 2017. In the
first
graph there were
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visitors
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staying
on cruise ships accounted for 0. 25
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millions
of
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travellers
.
Furthermore
, there was a considerable increase from 0. 25 to 1. 25 during 2010 and 2015,
however
, we can
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see
that number of
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visitors
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staying
on cruise ships climbed
gradually
, at the
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end
of the period stood at 2
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millions
of members.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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