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The line chart compares the number of incidents reported in the different sectors of crime in the inner city centre of Newport between 2003 to 2012.

The line chart compares the number of incidents reported in the different sectors of crime in the inner city centre of Newport between 2003 to 2012. WBwW
The line chart compares the number of incidents reported in the different sectors of crime in the inner city centre of Newport between 2003 to 2012. They are burglary, car theft and robbery. Overall, In burglary the number of incidents showed a downward trend whereas the car theft incidents and robbery displayed a marginal decrease at the end of the timeline. In the year 2003 near about 3400 incidents were recorded of burglary which was at its peak in 2004 then there was a downfall in incidents till 2008 and where minimum incidents were recorded. The number of crime of burglary started with marginal rise till the end of year 2012. Car theft incidents was constant in the year 2003 to 2005 around 2700 cases recorded. It showed steep fall in 2006 and it remained steady in the year 2008-2009 and it fluctuated but returned back to its place in the year 2012. There was a consistency in robbery the number of incidents which were recorded in the robbery is less than burglary and car theft. In the year 2003 it has around 600 cases but in the end of year 2005 it increased marginally. In the end of the timeline equal amount of cases were registered as which there in the 2003.
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different
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centre
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between 2003 to 2012
. They are
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burglary
,
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car
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theft
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Overall
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burglary
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incidents
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showed
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car
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theft
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incidents
and robbery displayed a marginal decrease at the
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end
of the timeline.

In the
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year
2003 near about 3400
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recorded
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burglary
which was at its peak in 2004 then there was a downfall in
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incidents
till 2008 and where minimum
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were
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recorded
. The
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number
of crime of
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burglary
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year
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2012. Car
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theft
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incidents
was constant in the
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2003 to 2005 around 2700 cases
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recorded
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showed
steep fall in 2006 and it remained steady in the
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2008-2009 and it fluctuated
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2012.

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recorded
in the robbery is less than
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burglary
and
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car
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theft
. In the
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year
2003 it has around 600 cases
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in the
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end
of
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year
2005 it increased
marginally
. In the
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end
of the timeline equal amount of cases
were registered
as which there in the 2003.
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IELTS academic The line chart compares the number of incidents reported in the different sectors of crime in the inner city centre of Newport between 2003 to 2012.

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