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The given graph demonstrates the percentage of part-time employees in 4 different states of United kingdom compared by two years, 1980 and 2010. Overall, The percentage of part-time workers significantly rises after two decades. In 1980, more than 30% of part-time workers have seen in wales while, the percentage was 20% down for Scotland in the same year. However, After 20 years, Part-time jobs in Scotland climbs to 20%. Surprisingly, Wales reaches to 32% which is only 2% overall growth after 20 years. On the other side, England finishes its 1980 counter with 25% which is however, drastically rises after decades. Furthermore, Half day workers at Northern Ireland stagnated at 15% in 1980. Shockingly, Northern Ireland noticed 2% of decrease in the year 2010 which is half of the percentage recorded in England.
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compared by two years, 1980 and 2010.

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of part-time workers
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In 1980, more than 30% of part-time workers have
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in wales while, the
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was 20% down for Scotland in the same
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However
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overall
growth after 20 years.

On the other side, England finishes its 1980 counter with 25% which is
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rises after decades.

Furthermore
, Half day workers at Northern Ireland stagnated at 15% in 1980.
Shockingly
, Northern Ireland noticed 2% of decrease in the
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2010 which is half of the
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recorded in England.
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IELTS academic Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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