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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. 62r0

The following line graph illustrates data about the number of individuals who reside in India and China, covering a period from 2000 to expected population levels in 2050. As can be seen from the graph is that at the beginning of the period (2000) the level of residents in China was over 1. 2 billion, which means that it has been twice higher in comparison with Indian population (1. 0). Similarly, both figures will rise substantially and in 2030 they will reach the same point, approximately 1. 4. It is worth mentioning that Chinese people will experience a slight fall after 2030 from 1. 45 to 1. 39, whereas Indian inhabitants will rise over the period and reach a peak at 1. 6 billion in 2050. Overall, what stands out from this graph is that the population sizes in both places significantly increased over the 50-year period, however it is anticipated that China’s population will slightly decrease from 2030, while the number of people who live in India will continue to grow.

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