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The graph below shows information about car ownership in Britain between 1971 and 2017

The graph below shows information about car ownership in Britain between 1971 and 2017 mAWL
The given line graph illustrated the data for the British car ownership in different categories from 1971 and 2017. Overall, the car ownership in Britain increased significantly throughout the years shown. In particular, the number of category with two cars rose, while the amount of one with no car fell. At the beginning of 1971, the percentage for two cars ownership grew exponentially from just under 10% in its initial year till just over 25% at the end of 2017. While, there was a sharp decrease in the percentage of no car ownership category towards 5% in 1971 from a bit under 50% in 2017. The figure for a car ownership remained unchanged at around 45% during the mentioned years. In contrast, the percentage of category with two cars and more was witnessed a gradual rise from 1% till 9% between 1971 and 2017.
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from 1971 and 2017
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Overall
, the
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car
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ownership
in Britain increased
significantly
throughout the years shown.
In particular
, the number of
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category
with two
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cars
rose, while the amount of one with no
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car
fell.

At the beginning of 1971, the percentage for two
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cars
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ownership
grew
exponentially
from
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under 10% in its initial year till
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just
over 25% at the
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end
of 2017.
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, there was a sharp decrease in the percentage of no
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car
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ownership
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category
towards 5% in 1971 from a bit under 50% in 2017.

The figure for a
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car
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ownership
remained unchanged at around 45% during the mentioned years.
In contrast
, the percentage of
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category
with two
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cars
and more
was witnessed
a gradual rise from 1% till 9% between 1971 and 2017.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows information about car ownership in Britain between 1971 and 2017

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