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The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. EQp3
The bar chart illustrates the famous sports activity played by boys and girls in New Zealand during the year 2002. Overall, from the given statics it clearly shows that the net ball is most come game among girls and for the boys the soccer is the common game. According to the given figure 25 per cent of girls play net ball as their favourite game. Next to that is swimming which is the second most popular game among girls group which is around 23 per cent. The least favourite game is circket and martial arts which is around 1 per cent and 4 per cent respectively. In case of boys soccer is most played among them which is opproximately 25 per cent and after that boys are most interested in other sports activity which is about 16 per cent. The least interested sports activity is net ball ( 1 per cent) which is double halves lesser percentage than girls. In case of martial arts(10 per cent) and circket ( 11 per cent) boys have more favourite game than girls.
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in New Zealand during the year 2002.
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clearly
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that the net ball is most
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and for the
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the soccer is the common game.

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group which is around 23 per cent. The least
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circket
and martial arts which is around 1 per cent and 4 per cent
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soccer is most played among them which is
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opproximately
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are most interested in other sports activity which is about 16 per cent. The least interested sports activity is net ball
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1 per cent) which is double halves lesser percentage than
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circket
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11 per cent)
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have more
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.

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