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The line graph provides information about the percentage of house fuel choices construction according to the year. This reports will represent the given data. Overall, the percentage of electricity experienced an upward trend while natural gas showed an downward trend through out the period. Both year's had some flautations. Likewise, the percentage of natural gas was less as compared to electricity at the end of period. First of all, the percentage of electricity was about 60 before 1950 which was higher than natural gas by approximately 15 in 1990 to 2010. After that, the percentage of natural gas was around 35 in 1970 to 1989 which contributed the most to 1950 and 1969 at 35. In the next stage, the percentage of electricity was around 45 as opposed to natural gas at 35 in 1970 to 1989. Following this, the percentage of natural gas was at 15 before 1950 which contributed the least to electricity 60 in 1950 to 1969.
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fuel choices construction according to the year. This reports will represent the
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data.

Overall
, the
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of
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electricity
experienced an upward trend while
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natural
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gas
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.
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natural
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was less
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was about 60
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before
1950 which was higher than
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gas
by approximately 15 in 1990 to 2010. After that, the
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percentage
of
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natural
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was around 35 in 1970 to 1989 which contributed the most to 1950 and 1969 at 35.

In the
next
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of
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electricity
was around 45 as opposed to
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natural
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gas
at 35 in 1970 to 1989. Following this, the
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of
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natural
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was at 15
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1950 which contributed the least to
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60 in 1950 to 1969.
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