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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

The chart below compares real estate prices in five different cities in five different countries in two different periods of time with 1989's average price. It can be seen that two cities changed their situation and their price changed from minus percentage to plus in 1996-2002 period. Other three cities have same positive and negative sides on the graph. Starting from 1990 to 1995 Frankfurt had the biggest percentage increase in housing prices with approximately 2. 5 percent increase. Madrid real estate market also increased but a little bit lower than Frankfurt. New York City declined on 5 percent. And the highest price lost was in Tokyo and London. Both are equal and have minus 7 percent drop.  But in the 1996 - 2002 period situation changed. London became top 1 because of its price increased on 22 percent comparing with 1989 average cost. Now it is 5 times higher than top one's percentage in 1990 - 1995. New York City changed situation too. From minus five percent it raised to five with 10 percent positive growth. Costs for houses in Madrid increased on 3 percent. In Frankfurt real estate market was still better than 1989's. Tokyo had its peak costs in 1989.
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from minus percentage to plus in 1996-2002 period. Other three
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

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