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- The graph below gives information to form a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

- The graph below gives information to form a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. awVmd
The graph illustrates detailed information report made in 2008 about the energy consumption in the USA from 1980 until the present date and predictions until 2030. Combining data in a diagram uses quadrillion units, and time period with this six fuel category used for plotting. Start with petrol and oil consumption, started with 35 quadrillion units and rise until 50 quadrillion units over a time which is highest amongst all with slight decrease in the period from 1985 to 1995. Coal and natural gases almost go in hand in hand but in the end, coal will be predicted to reach 30 quadrillion units whereas, Natural gases will give a constant output nearby from 2014 to the end of 2030. Lastly, nuclear, solar, hydropower energy began with approximately 4 quadrillion units in 1980. Rise with an equal amount of growth over the same time in all three, not goes above 8 quadrillion units. Hydropower, solar, and wind ran constantly in the year 2010 and predicted to continue with the same pace until 2025, 3 and 4 quadrillion units respectively. Nuclear energy contributed equal share from 2005 to 2025 as a future and slight increase in next five years and end up with 8 quadrillion units.
The graph illustrates detailed information report made in 2008 about the energy consumption in the USA from 1980 until the present date and predictions until 2030. Combining data in a diagram
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over a time which is highest amongst all with slight decrease in the period from 1985 to 1995. Coal and natural gases almost go
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, nuclear, solar, hydropower energy began with approximately 4 quadrillion
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in 1980. Rise with an equal amount of growth over the same time in all three, not goes above 8 quadrillion
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. Hydropower, solar, and wind ran
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IELTS academic - The graph below gives information to form a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

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