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The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. GbkQ
The graph shows a bakery sales of it’s three most popular products, which are bread, buns and pies, over the 2014. Bread demant shown more varions over the year in contrats to the other products, with variation as high as a 50%. It’s Sales shown a clear rise on demant in January and December, reaching a peak of $80, 000 USD, which it’s the higher sales peak among the three mentioned products, however it’s demants average on the second and third trimester of the year were of $55. 000 USD approximately. Buns sales presented an opposit demant to bread, getting more sales on the second and third trimesters of the year, with a sosteined sales peak of $70, 000 USD, which makes it the most important product between the three most commonly purchased items. Pies were the least important product over the year, nevertheless it’s sales shown a steady. On the last trimester it’s demand presented an extreordinary increase. In conclusion, it can be stated that between the most popular products of this bakery, the most important in terms of sales are Buns, followed by bread and Pies in the thrid place.
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, which are bread, buns and pies, over the 2014.

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in
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in January and December, reaching a peak of $80, 000 USD, which it’s the higher
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peak among the three mentioned
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,
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average on the second and third trimester of the
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were of $55. 000 USD approximately.

Buns
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presented an
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opposit
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on the second and third trimesters of the
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peak of $70, 000 USD, which
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Pies were the least
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of this bakery, the most
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014.

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