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The diagram below shows the life cycle of a cotton t-shirt. Write a report describing the process shown below.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a cotton t-shirt. Write a report describing the process shown below. mne1

There are 12 steps of the life cycle of a cotton t-shirt. In the first stage, the cotton is picked by a machine called a cotton picker, which helps save time harvesting. Next, the cotton is compacted into the bales by truck to cloth-making companies. After that the cotton is spun into thread, and it is woven so as to get fabrics. At this point, the fabrics are designed and dyed with decorations and colours so that t-shirt is fully decorated and completed. The finished t-shirts are packaged to ensure the quality of the products and sold to the shop. Finally, those t-shirts are bought and used by the customers or consumers. After using, the cotton t-shirts can be thrown in the bin or burnt, however, it should be recycled so as not to impact the environment.

There are 12 steps of the life cycle of a cotton You use this word too often, consider replacing it withturtleneckbodicepullover
t-shirt
. In the first
 stage, the cotton is picked
 by a machine called a cotton picker, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 save time harvesting.

Next
, the cotton is compacted
 into the bales by truck to cloth-making This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
. After that the cotton is spun
 into thread, and it is woven
'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"to
so as to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 fabrics. At this point, the fabrics are designed
 and dyed with decorations and Possible spelling mistake. 'colours' is British English.colors
colours
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withturtleneckbodicepullover
t-shirt
 is fully
 decorated and completed. The finished You use this word too often, consider replacing it withturtleneckbodicepullover
t-shirts
are packaged
 to ensure the quality of the products and sold to the shop.

Finally
, those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withturtleneckbodicepullover
t-shirts
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 by the customers or consumers. After using, the cotton You use this word too often, consider replacing it withturtleneckbodicepullover
t-shirts
 can be thrown
 in the bin or burnt, however
, it should be recycled
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 as not to impact the environment. 