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The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Write a report describing the information below.

The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Write a report describing the information below. Xnp0g
The graph shows changes in the number of cars per household in Great Britain over a period of 36 years. Overall, car ownership in British households increased between 1971 and 2007. In particular, the percentage of households with two cars rose, while the figure for households without a car fell. In 1971, nearly half of British families were not regularly using a car. While around 44/% of households owned a car, the figure for families having two cars was about 8%. Households with three or more cars were uncommon, only 1% of families falling into this category. The one-car households became the most common type in Britain, at about 45% from the late 1970’s. The percentage of families without a car fell steadily by about 25% in 2007. By contrast, the figures for households with more than two cars increased, rising to 26% and it rose to 7% for families with more than three cars (included three).
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changes
in the number of
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cars
per
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household
in Great Britain over a period of 36 years.
Overall
,
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car
ownership in British
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households
increased between 1971 and 2007.
In particular
, the percentage of
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households
with two
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cars
rose, while the figure for
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households
without a
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car
fell.

In 1971,
nearly
half of British
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families
were not
regularly
using a
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car
. While around 44/% of
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households
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owned
a
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car
, the figure for
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families
having two
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cars
was about 8%.
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Households
with three or more
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cars
were uncommon,
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only
1% of
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families
falling into this category.

The one-car
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households
became the most common type in Britain, at about 45% from the late
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1970’s
. The percentage of
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families
without a
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car
fell
steadily
by about 25% in 2007. By contrast, the figures for
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households
with more than two
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cars
increased, rising to 26% and it rose to 7% for
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families
with more than three
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cars
(included three).

IELTS academic The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Write a report describing the information below.

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157 words
6.0
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