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The chart below gives information about the numbers of students who do different courses at an American university in 2017 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates datas about how many students is educated six main subjects at US university in 2017. That is clear from the chart, numbers of finance studying students was further than others. Accounting, mathematics, economics, marketing and engineeiring follow it in descending order. Engineering was the least studying area. Finance surpassed proportion of students. 400 students studied this subject and numbers of famele and male students constituted equality. Engineering was the subject with the least number of students. However, similarly finance famele and male students nearly same propotion. Second place by 350 numbers was accounting. Famele students took more this lesson than male studens. 190 students educating was in marketing, as accounting fameles exceeded males. İn contrast accounting and marketing, only 70 out of 220 students studying economics were famele students. One of the most popular subjects among students was mathematics. Male students was 200 whereas famele students were fewer likely four-fold.
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