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the graph bellow shows the percentage of the age population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020.

the graph bellow shows the percentage of the age population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. lLEPD

The bar graph shows the comparison of people in various age living in Iceland from 1990 to 2020. From an overall perspective, we could conclude that 25-54 age group rise up significantly over 30 years span, while the other two younger groups are encountering defaltion in significant number. On top of that, the number of individual in the two older category remained steady through-out the period. The 25-54 group grow tremendously from one-third population in the beginning of the period to almost the half of population in 2020. The 0-14 group undergo a constant decrease from almost touching 30% in 1990 to under 20% in the end of the period, but still appears as the second largest population. At last the same trend also happens with 15-24 group, it starts as far as 20% and ends up under 10%. On the contrary other two more elderly group stayed stable with a slight increase of 3% in year 2010 and remained stable until 2020 for 85 and over group, while 55-64 maintained the same level with a not very noticable change in 10% level.

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