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The provided graph shows information on yearly outlay on cell phone and residential phone services over a 9 year period, starting from 2001 up to 2010. Overall, the spending on cell phone services showed an upward trend, whereas it was not the same case for the residential phone services. In 2001, the amount of money spent on both services varied dramatically, notably 200$ for cell phone services and about 700$ for residential phone services.  Over the next five years both services depicted different changes in their values. The popularity of the cell phone services went up gradually, while the residential ones' experienced a slight decrease. In 2006, people spent the same amount of money on both services, just shy of 550$. Since 2006, the observed trends remained steady. At the end of the given period, the gap between two values was approximately 350$. In summary, the expenditures on cell phone services outnumbered the expenses on on residential phone services
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services.

In 2001, the amount of money spent on both
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and about
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.  Over the
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in their values. The popularity of the
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went up
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ones' experienced a slight decrease. In 2006,
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spent the same amount of money on both
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,
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. Since 2006, the observed trends remained steady. At the
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period, the gap between two values was approximately
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In summary, the expenditures on
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outnumbered the expenses
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